Peace
A word with many meanings
If I could change one thing
Living in peace like room to yourself
Just like Clouds filled of peaceful doves
When lying in bed and thinking to myself
I realize more and more how our society is far from peaceful
If only that could change
Peace
A state in mind
Were you feel its just you in the world
The clearing of the soul and mind
How I wish it could change
Into a pace were we all would want to live
What about peace?
Sunday, November 30, 2008
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These lines are not very poetic: "If I could change one thing
Living a peaceful life would be it"
Cliche, "No war or no crimes
Just peace and harmony"
I like what you're going for here, but you need to reach beyond the cliche to more interesting imagery.
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